As I alluded in my post yesterday, I thought I’d share some of my creative writing with you all. Writing helps me escape to different worlds, taking a break from whatever I may currently be facing, whether it is the physical variety–such as Achalasia or Osteoarthritis, or of the mental variety–anxiety and depression. Perhaps sharing my writing will give you a chance to escape too, even for a wee bit. The writing I will be sharing with you today is from September and January of 2016. So, here goes!
Prompt: Write a scene that begins: “It was the first time I killed a man.” January 8, 2016
It was the first time I killed a man, and frankly, he deserved it. I laughed, perhaps not without a tinge of hysteria, as I washed my hands, watching the blood sweep down the drain of the sink. Some had crusted around the cuticles of each finger, and I scrubbed at these. My hands shook slightly, from the cold of the water and the shock of what I had done.
I hadn’t planned it. But that doesn’t mean I hadn’t secretly entertained the idea, a small smile playing at my lips every time. Sometimes I dreamt about it at night, tossing and turning, my legs tangling in the bed sheets. Other times I dreamt of it in the full light of day, mindlessly stirring at a cup of coffee or while braiding my hair. Mostly I thought about it at the sight of his face. That god damn fucking smiling face that told me one thing, yet I knew better. See, he didn’t know that I had hired a private investigator. It’s not that I had become suspicious of him; rather, my family had. So, he didn’t know that I knew, but I did. I knew what a fucking liar he was. The truth was that he was a wife beater. A user. He didn’t care who he took down with him. He didn’t just use and steal from strangers. No, that was bad enough. He used me and stole my heart and sanity. And I’m pretty sure he had killed a man, or nearly so. Regardless, he was a drain on society, a leech. A parasite. And I was determined to not only permanently erase him from my life but do the entire world a favor by extinguishing him.
I reached to turn off the tap. Humming, I gave myself a good look in the mirror, and as I did so, I was reminded of the surprised look in his eyes as I took his life. I had made sure to do it nice and slow. There are no easy ways out. Especially when you’re a bastard. I laughed suddenly, feeling a lightness in my chest that I hadn’t in months. I swiped on a light pink lip gloss, and turning to my closet, picked out a light summer frock. Whistling, I left my apartment, full of happy anticipation for a new start. I pushed the elevator call button, and as the doors slowly slid open, I saw…
Prompt: Where would you be now if you had married your first love? January 8, 2016
I would be where I wouldn’t want to be. Population some 250,000. Not too small. Not too big. But not just right. A town where some leave but most stay and know nothing beyond its invisible walls. They seem content. But not me. I’ve got an itch. A deep itch. And it’s telling me it won’t be content until I go.
And if I stayed? Well, then. I’d be married to my high school love. First love for me. But I can’t speak for him. Tall, dark, and handsome. Dazzling smile. We met freshman year in high school U.S. History. I didn’t learn much about the history of our country. I was too busy passing notes folded up into those little football triangles. The ones where you stick the corner of the paper into a little pocket, snug. His handwriting was small, cramped. But neat and predictable. I knew he would always write a reply, flash a smile. Faithful, really. Well, faithful with the pen, anyway. I saved every carefully folded football letter in a Nike shoe box I safely concealed in my bedroom. When I’d get lonely, desire another taste of him, I’d carefully unfold the notebook pages, smiling as I read.
Each day as the note passing continued back and forth I waited with eager anticipation for him to invite me to Homecoming. I knew without one shred of doubt that he would ask me, that he would be my boyfriend. Until I found out that he asked another girl, saw them holding hands in the hallway. Totally blindsided. Heart crushed. Whereas he kept us a secret within the quiet, sneaky passing of the notes, he publicly declared her his girlfriend. There was no explanation. No apology. The notes stopped as suddenly as they had started. And since that day I never allowed myself to be open and vulnerable. I grew up. Moved away. Perhaps a fresh start. From everything and nothing.
When I moved back after a fourteen year absence we somehow reconnected. He texted me, flirted with me, and I reciprocated. Our love notes to one another were the same; the only difference was that they were digital, a cold replacement for the pen, the tangible folded paper triangles that I could collect and place in a box. But there was no collecting of him, keeping of his heart. Cause things do not change. People fundamentally are the same. For I found out he was engaged. A year from marriage to another woman, two years from fatherhood. And I was still a fool. So, what would have happened if somehow I would have married him? I would have remained in Vancouver, been lied to and cheated on, possibly a single mom, chasing ghosts.
Prompt: Wouldn’t it be weird… September 6, 2016
Wouldn’t it be weird standing on your own food as you ate it? Or for that matter, standing in it? Imagine a warm bowl of potato soup. You’re holding a spoon the same size as you, struggling to scoop up a piece of potato as it floats by. Finally, you give up and bend over to lap up the warm broth with your tongue. Imagine a thick bowl of baked beans, so thick it’s almost like quicksand, sucking at your feet. Somehow you find the spoon from your potato soup, lying half submerged in the beans, and you grab hold tight with one hand while shoving a gooey, brown sugar-sweetened bean into your mouth with the other.
The beans morph into black-eyed peas. Is it your imagination or did they just wink at you? And in that wink, in that blink of an eye, the peas have transformed into a bowl of Jell-O. You hop, bounce and slide into a valley of whipped cream where a cherry the size of a dodge ball has become lodged. You take a healthy bite, ripping a large chunk out of its red flesh, setting the cherry free of its prison. You grab hold of its stem, and as the cherry careens haphazardly through the valley, you come to a monument of cheese. Hard cheese monoliths, crags of crumbled feta, pools of molten cheese perfect for dipping, and caverns of Swiss. You break off a hunk of Asiago from the monolith, shoving it into your mouth, followed by a hunk of feta. You find a cracker the size of your head and dunk it in the cheese lava. You nibble away furiously, as you start to feel your stomach roil. Staggering towards the Swiss cheese cave, you crawl through a hole into the dark interior. You feebly grab hold of the cheese wall, fingering away a piece of it. This too you put into your reluctant mouth. Your stomach churns. You lie down in that cheese cave and fall into a restless sleep. Someone is shaking you. You moan and slap away the hand. More shaking, more moaning. You crack open your eyes and are surprised by the bright light stabbing at your eyeballs. As your eyes adjust, you see concerned eyes peering into yours at the same time a sharp pain rips through your guts. “Are you okay? You were moaning and tossing and turning,” your mom says. “Yeah, Mom, I just had a wicked dream and my stomach hurts.” She offers to get you an Alka-Seltzer as you start to daydream about a huge slice of blackberry pie as big as your house.
Prompt: Tell the true story of a dramatic moment in your life, but weave in one secret and one lie. September 3, 2016.
*as you read this short story, I would like for you to try to determine what the secret and lie are, and share your ideas with me!*
The short flight from Seattle to Portland so far was uneventful and marked the last leg of my journey home from Tokyo. I met a couple of businessmen on the flight who routinely took this flight for business. As we flew over the Columbia River on our final approach to Portland International Airport, I craned my neck in an attempt to spot my parents’ house. There! There it is! I thought, as I took in its aerial view. “I’m almost home!” I whispered to myself, when all of a sudden the airplane sped up, rising sharply into the sky. The airplane began to shake violently as it continued its assent at an alarming rate. I gripped the armrests, my knuckles turning white, and stared wildly out the window at the shrinking river. At the same time, everything seemed to slow down, as in slow motion the passengers and I looked around at one another, our mouths slack in silent horror. So, this is how the end is going to come? I thought to myself. I’m going to die here, on this plane, in that river, in front of my parents’ house? This can’t be! And yet, as this realization came to me, I felt a sense of peace wash over me while at the same time, I apologized to my family for what they were going to have to deal with…the loss of their daughter, granddaughter, sister, cousin, niece…And then…I wasn’t afraid of dying. But I was afraid for those I’d leave behind. Abruptly the nose of the airplane tilted down. We began to quickly lose altitude. And suddenly and unbelievably, we were making a hasty landing…at the airport.
I continued to clutch the armrests as our airplane taxied to the gate, trying but failing to wrap my mind around what had just happened. The businessmen repeatedly insisted out loud that this had never happened before. “It’s not normal! What the hell just happened?” But they were drunk, so I didn’t pay them much mind. Once we arrived at the terminal, the pilot, uttering not one word, staggered out of the cockpit and slumped into an empty first class seat. As we filed past him to get off the airplane, I noticed a haunted look pasted on his face, his eyes wide and unblinking. A passenger asked him, “What the hell was that?” And the pilot simply responded, “The other plane in front of us…” Was it a near mid-air collision? I don’t know, but that’s all I could surmise as I walked off that plane, the feeling of a ghost trailing after me.